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Lover's Scare Contest-Cherise Sinclair Capture Gardens Excerpt from Make me, Sir

10/20/2011

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Capture Gardens
Excerpt from Make me, Sir
By Cherise Sinclair

“Marcus, I didn’t know you planned to play tonight.” The silver-haired dom smiled. His pale blue eyes examined Gabi. “That’s a pretty yellow outfit. Might as well match it.” He picked up three yellow plastic sticks and flexed them until they glowed. “Give me your arm, girl.”

She held her hand out. He fastened one around her wrist, one on her ankle, and the last on Marcus’s wrist. “The colors are a safeguard so the dungeon monitors can check that a dom grabs the right sub. In other words, only Master Marcus may claim you, Gabrielle. Clear so far?”

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Her breasts bounced painfully as she ran, and she slowed quickly. As the plush golf-course-length grass tickled her feet, a sultry night breeze wafted against her bare skin. It felt strange—wrong—to walk around outside with no clothes on.

Rubbing her arms, she continued on. Hedges loomed on each side, opening into secluded areas with menacing shadows. “Give Master Marcus a good hunt,” Master Raoul had said, so she turned down a smaller path, working her way deeper in. Other glow lights twinkled here and there, reminding her she wasn’t the only submissive in the game.

What a beautiful place though. The moonlight paled the curving flower gardens. Fountains splashed and gurgled everywhere, and lights under the water glowed. White fog drifted through the humid air and swirled around her ankles. Fog? She glanced up at the cloudless night sky and frowned, then realized the fog came from the fountains, spilling like thick mist over the sides.

They created fake fog, just for fun? She shook her head, trying to be amused, except the stuff made the place really eerie.

A man’s voice broke the quiet. “Lords and ladies, the hunt is on. Find your slaves and do what you will.”

Oh my God.

Multicolored glow sticks danced like fireflies through the darkness. People ran here and there. Some of them. Other lights moved slower, more deliberately. The doms. Stalking their slaves.

And the sounds… A scream from the right. The slap of flesh on flesh and whimpering—someone getting spanked. Gabi turned her head and heard wet sounds and simultaneous grunts from the left—someone getting taken. Hard.

She had a quick image of Marcus grabbing her, forcing her to her knees, and driving into her. She sucked in a breath. He wouldn’t. That wasn’t what she wanted. Yet her nipples peaked, and her body dampened again.

He’d be out there somewhere, searching for her yellow glow stick. Hunting her. The air seemed to heat, wafting over her skin like a hot breath.

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She bolted toward the thicker bushes. If she got around those—and she did—he’d have a more difficult time spotting her bracelet. Panting, she stopped and spun in a circle—and spotted a yellow glow stick. A few feet away. Perfectly still.

“Run.”

Her heart hammered even before she sprinted across the path. He—What was he going to do when he caught her? He really was a cat, toying with his prey. She veered around a hedge and ran straight into him, a solid wall of muscle. “Oooph!”

He chuckled and set her on her feet. “The next time, sugar, I’m taking you down.” He stepped back a pace. “Run.”

The low-voiced threat sent excitement churning through her, making her aware of the cool fog against her ankles, the way bushes scraped on her naked body when she got too close, the way her breasts jostled as she ran. A corner. Another. She popped into a secluded spot to catch her breath, and back out and--

He grabbed her from behind.

“No!” Instinctive terror blasted her. She twisted and shoved at him frantically.

Marcus… It was Marcus, not a stranger. Okay. Okay. Using her head now, she pulled and sidestepped, and his hands slipped off her oily body.

“Li’l brat.” He made another grab for her.

I’m a greased pig, all right. Giggling, she dashed for the far side of the clearing, gaining only a few yards before his hand closed on her arm—and she yanked out off his grasp. No hitting or scratching, she reminded herself.

“You are a slippery little thing, aren’t you?” he said, his southern accent markedly increased. The bastard grabbed her hair.

“Ow!” She turned to hit him—rules be damned—and he moved faster than she’d thought possible. Setting an arm behind her shoulders, the other up between her legs, he yanked her hips forward, tipping her backward, then dropped down on his knees with her in his arms. Before she got her balance, he rolled her onto her stomach.

No way. She got her feet under her and lunged forward.

With a low laugh, he caught her ankle and yanked her back, then set a knee on her butt. His weight pinned her, making her feel…odd. Excited.

Yet the second his powerful hands closed on her shoulders, terror engulfed her in a cold, mindless fog. She froze.

He stilled. Waited. She caught a whiff of his musky amber scent, and warmth dissipated her fear. It was Marcus touching her. Knowing his knee rested on her bare bottom, his weight trapped her, made all the difference. She wiggled and couldn’t resist taunting him. “You rat-bastard dipwad, let me go.”

Chuckling, he tightened his grip. “Mouthy little sub.” The wrist cuffs snicked off his belt. “I am going to enjoy what I do to you.”

Oh God. Under the growing tension, unable to help herself, she squirmed, and he simply put more weight on her. Controlling her.

Despite her thrashing, he firmly buckled one wrist cuff on and the other, then clipped them together behind her back. When he removed his weight, she thought he’d pull her to her feet. Instead his knee pushed between her thighs, keeping her legs apart.

His jeans scraped against the sensitive skin of her inner thighs. For a minute, he didn’t move. And then he stroked her legs, traced the crack between her butt checks, squeezed her waist. He ruthlessly touched her how and where he pleased, and her skin burned under his calloused hands until it seemed she might set the grass beneath her on fire.

He set his palm between her legs to cup her heat and gave a satisfied, “Mmmmh. You’re nice and wet, darlin’.”

His touch roused her, yet…she felt too naked, too restrained, too vulnerable. Needing to escape, she wiggled. Helplessly.

“No, Gabrielle.” His voice deepened, a smooth threat as his hand pressed on her ass cheeks, holding her in place. “Stay put, sugar. I want to examine my prize.”

The commanding voice, the knowledge he wouldn’t let her move, melted her inside. This was what she wanted, needed. Someone to take the control from her. She turned her head and rested her cheek. The cool grass scraped and tantalized her bunching nipples, an erotic contrast to his warm hand on her bottom.

“Good girl.” His unyielding hand held her down as with his other, he touched her intimately, caressing her folds and sending heat lancing up her center. When he slowly pressed a finger through her puffy tissues and up inside her, pleasure boiled up so violently that her eyes almost crossed.

His finger slid out, then pushed in deeper. He made another pleased sound. “Yes, Li’l Sassy, I’m going to tie you down, spread you open, and see how much of me you can take.”

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56 Comments
J.S .Wayne link
10/19/2011 05:21:25 pm

WOW, Cherise!
Great excerpt. That is some seriously SEXY business happening there! :)

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SiNn
10/19/2011 10:57:53 pm

oh wow just wow tat i soo hot i need to read more for sure great excerpts

mortalsinn(A)yahoo(DOT)com

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Mary Rosado
10/20/2011 01:36:59 am

Love your books

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R. Renee Vickers link
10/20/2011 05:23:01 am

Good gobs that was fantastic! I was smiling the whole time reading it. mmmmm. Thanks for the steamy read!
~Renee
(museampoule@gmail.com)

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Cherise Sinclair link
10/20/2011 07:13:50 am

Thanks, JS, Sinn, Mary, and Renee! There's something so erotic about being chased in the dark...I'm glad this lil excerpt worked for you. :-)

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rita z
10/20/2011 09:33:33 am

I can't say this was hot because that would just be insulting, because it's so so so over the hot label. Fire extinguisher hot. You always know how to tell a story.

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Riane Holt
10/20/2011 09:36:56 am

Cherise!!

Oh, I love this scene!! I smiled all the way through it. Now I'm itching to go back and re-read the entire darn book! I can't tho. Currently re-reading Hour of the Lion! Argh!! So many books, so little time! **mumbles something about a Cherise series post on her blog... yeah... that's an idea.**

Riane
rianeholt at gmail dot com

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Amy
10/20/2011 09:38:36 am

Cherise, it was great to revisit this story - I'm a fangirl, LOL, have read all your books (so far, can't wait for something new?). Thanks to Bianca, too, for hosting this contest. Good luck everyone!

amyDOTtooheyATgmailDOTcom

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Ashley
10/20/2011 10:07:06 am

Cherise Sinclair can do no wrong. I love every book she has written. I enjoyed this scene in her book and I can't wait for her next one to come out in Nov.
grindhouse300@hotmail.com

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Deb link
10/20/2011 10:21:19 am

I loved it!

Dday2@prodigy.net

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Karen Hawk
10/20/2011 12:23:18 pm

Just reading this makes me so anxious to see Master Raoul's book in November! Love everything Cherise has written.

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Cris
10/20/2011 12:44:44 pm

Everything I've ever read from Cherise I've loved. Never thought I would enjoy this genre but she makes it so believable it's like real life. Like most I can't wait for November and see what she has in store for us.
Cris.lippin@gmail.com

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Amy
10/20/2011 02:46:40 pm

I love Cherise's books! I never thought I'd enjoy reading BDSM, but Cherise's Doms are caring and loving, so I am addicted.

angeldream3[AT]gmail[DOT]com

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BeccaL
10/20/2011 02:48:49 pm

with each one of theDarhaven books I read, I just want to read more. Cherise has a wonderful way of making You want to wlk on the wild side,
Beccal

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Cherise Sinclair link
10/20/2011 04:52:56 pm

Thanks to everyone who stopped by! I'm looking forward to that November release too and hoping it meets expectations (oh, lord...biting fingernails already)

I hope y'all pop back in to check out the other excerpts as the 14 days of contest goes on. Bianca has found a wonderful line-up of authors (and prizes!)

Thank you, Bianca, for inviting me to participate! :-)

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Cathy
10/20/2011 07:09:09 pm

Your books always leave me anxiously waiting for the next. Hardly fair as it takes immeasurably longer to write them than to read them, but I don't care. I want more. Now. Dammit. *stomps foot* Sorry, it's the caffeine talking ;)

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Anne
10/21/2011 02:11:11 am

This is actually the first excerpt I've read with an erotic chase scene. I can see the appeal.

acm05atjuno.com

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Donna B
10/21/2011 03:16:03 am

Love it! Cherise, you are the best!!!

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Corina
10/21/2011 03:42:02 am

Love, love, love this book and all of the others in this series! Cherise in a damn good author. Wish I could have Marcus after me.(fanning myself :) )

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Cherise Sinclair link
10/21/2011 05:11:40 am

Thanks, Corina, Donna, Anne, and Cathy!

Cathy, see that St. Andrews cross behind you? See this heavy flogger and that big Dom? You'd best behave. Heheheh. ;-)

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Nicky link
10/21/2011 11:44:36 am

Great excerpt. I really enjoyed this book (and all the others, too.)

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Tamsyn
10/21/2011 11:08:14 pm

I love this excerpt! That is one very hot scene. Thanks for sharing

tamsyn5@yahoo.com

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Missy
10/22/2011 02:46:17 am

Great excerpt!! Love all your books. I find myself anxiously awaiting the next!
I think I've read the teaser for Raouls' story at least 8 times!!

mnjcarter@charter.net

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cathy m
10/22/2011 10:27:58 am

Love your storytelling, Cherise, and you got my vote in the poll.


caity_mack at yahoo dot com

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desi reilly
10/22/2011 12:21:17 pm

wow the books are getting better and better cool
desitheblonde@msn.com

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Susan Foulkes link
10/22/2011 02:24:32 pm

Fabulous excerpt - I love all the Shadowlands books....think I need to re-read them! :)
Hugs xx
foulkes.susan@gmail.com

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Trisha
10/22/2011 06:23:59 pm

ohhh LOVED the scene, I just finished Re-reading all the Shadowlands books... waiting on Master Raouls story in Nov Anxiously!

Congrats Cherise for making Shadowlands a great place to visit & getting all our hopes up for a RL one ;P

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sylvie Argirakis
10/23/2011 09:34:39 am

Cherise, you're my favorite author!!

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Seiko
10/23/2011 10:59:30 am

Can't wait for the next book to come out!

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Cherise Sinclair link
10/23/2011 11:33:31 am

Y'all are so sweet. Thank you!

BTW, Tamsyn, I love your name!

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Chris Milway
10/23/2011 04:00:52 pm

Hello everyone. I have to tell you I feel like a COMPLETE idiot. lol I have spent an hour trying to figure out how to post a comment. LOL I have read this book and it is INCREDIBLE!!! My question/statement is Is this place real? Cherise has written the story line (all the books) so well that I want a membership to the Shadowlands!!!! Well maybe a couple of visits to there and Dark Haven LOLOLOL. I can't wait for Master Rauol's book. LOVE YOUR WORK CHERISE!!!!! Ok (deep breath) how do we post for Deadly Captive? I have to say that I have some MAJOR didtz airhead vibes going on here......

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Monique link
10/23/2011 05:10:20 pm

Sexy hide n seek. Marcus sounds delightful! Looks like I need to start reading some of these Shadowlands books.

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Christina Hay
10/24/2011 04:02:58 am

oh my goodness....naked chase! mmmy sounds like fun!
mhay@panhandle.rr.com

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Angela Evans
10/24/2011 02:47:02 pm

This has to be one of my all time fav's of your books Cherise. And I so enjoyed re-reading this exerpt. I would kill to try out a chase scene with my hubbie. Hehehe.

dilaby@hotmail.com

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Margie Hager
10/24/2011 02:51:50 pm

Love, love, love your books, Cherise. Can't wait for your next release! No one has been able to outdo your books in this genre as far as I am concerned. Keep 'em comin', please.

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Marissa Giles
10/24/2011 02:57:18 pm

I am so excited for November. Love the excerpt now I am going back to reread Make Me, Sir.

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Chris Milway
10/24/2011 02:58:05 pm

Will the Shadowland characters ever mix/visit the Dark Haven characters?

amourousvixen@gmail.com

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Wendy
10/24/2011 02:59:53 pm

I have all the books....memorized and in print well the ones that are in print....what can I say...huge crazy fan of Cherise!

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Cherise Sinclair link
10/24/2011 03:10:53 pm

Thanks for the compliments, people!

And I'm so glad you managed to comment, Chris! I'm not sure if the Dark Haven people will ever meet the Shadowlands ones. Not in the near future.

And having My Liege Xavier and Master Z together? Eek! Every submissive in the area would probably be hiding under a table. LOL

Angela, there's lots of nice empty forests out there waiting for you and your DH. ;-) (just watch out for poison ivy, eh?)




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Mud
10/24/2011 03:15:47 pm

Your books help keep a long marriage happy!

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Kathy
10/24/2011 03:46:14 pm

I love your book Cherise!! I have read Make Me Sir and love the Hunts scene. If you haven't read any of Cherise's books she popped a hunt scene in one of the other Shadowland books. Hunt scenes are always hot. Just read Master Rauol's excerpt can't wait to read his book!!!

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Monica Hoersch
10/26/2011 05:11:23 am

I love your books and it's funny I just happen to be re reading Master of the Abyss right now, lol. I can't wait for your Master Raoul's story next!
Monica
mjwpg@yahoo.com

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Jennifer Boyd
10/26/2011 05:22:13 am

I love this excerpt as well as every other book in the series. YUMMY!

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Suzi
10/26/2011 05:28:24 am

I love these books. Waiting for this in Print so i can add it to the collection :)

Suzi

(superguard23@yahoo.com)

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Simone
10/26/2011 05:36:56 am

*happy sigh* I loved this scene in this book and what a great way to get in the mood this Haunted season :D

I can't wait till November and Master Raoul's Story!

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Tina Neighbor
10/26/2011 05:39:24 am

Loved this book!

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DiDi link
10/26/2011 06:00:36 am

OMG!! I MUST SCHEDULE SERIES RE-READ SOON!! hmmm should I leave my email or hope Cherise will send one of her Masters to dole out a punishment ;-)

didi@guiltypleasuresbookreviews.com

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Cherise Sinclair link
10/27/2011 05:53:11 am

Y'all are so sweet! Thank you!

And now... *pulling the flogger out from under the bed and handing it to Master Sam*

I've heard from Mistress Bianca that some of you haven't been following the rules. If you don't leave an email, she has requested that you be disciplined...and Master Sam has very generously agreed to assist.

Need I say more?

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KathyinAiken
10/27/2011 07:50:30 am

Love Cherise's work and the capture scene was wonderful!

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Tracey D
10/28/2011 01:40:35 am

Loved the excerpt. Another book for my must have list.

Thanks,
Tracey D
booklover0226 at gmail dot com

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Zeneida
10/28/2011 04:23:13 am

Great work Cherise. Love this book and all the others too. :)

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Zeneida
10/28/2011 04:26:44 am

Oh. I forgot the email..Please Master Sam. ..one more chance..I promise to pay more attention next time.(eyes down and looking very inocent)

zeneidaypaco@comcast.net

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Andrea I
10/28/2011 09:49:40 am

I've definitely got to move this one up on my TBR list.

ainfinger@comcast.net

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Ashley
10/29/2011 10:21:42 am

As I have said before I am looking forward to Nov. relase date for Master Raoul. BIG fan. I also want to say that I have read on your facebook page that Zeb (Hour of the Lion) is getting his own book. *sigh. I love him. Thank you for creating such amazing charcters.
grindhouse300@hotmail.com

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MJB
10/29/2011 05:19:46 pm

Hi, Cherise.
I love this book! I've read all of the books in this series and I've loved them all. The Capture Graden was a very cool idea - do these types of gardens exist in real life or only in your very created brain? I'd love to know.
MJB
msmjb65 AT gmail DOT com

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Cherise Sinclair link
10/30/2011 05:27:49 am

I'm glad y'all are enjoying the excerpt!

Good girl, Zeneida!...and Master Sam says he doesn't believe your innocent look for a second.

@Ashley, thank you! re: Zeb--it's so fun to work with a guy that scares the pants off everyone.

@MJB: I've run across some variations that come close to the Capture Gardens, and one place had a day in the woods devoted to this kind of fantasy.


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